EPISODE #1  Introduction in a coffee house.  Origin of Quantum Girl, poetry reading as in the comic that Jean-Paul and I did.  She is setting at a table with her friends, Ashley and (an extra) and showing them how to make a Usama Bin Laden $20.  (How to fold an Osama $20 is located here http://www.glennbeck.com/news/05172002.shtml )Ashley gets up to read her poetry and Quantum girl moves over to Ashley's seat to better hear her.   She starts reading the mind of Ashley.  This is when she discovers that she can read minds of people after they have left an area.   The Son of Mad Blaster comes in and throws a grenade at the crowd.  He laughs hysterically  He is wearing a mask (lone ranger type) and quickly exits.  Close shot on Quantum Girl and friend (Extra) at table.  Wider shot on others as they quickly lay on the floor.  Episode one ends.

THE SCENE OPENS IN A COFFEE HOUSE WITH QUANTUM GIRL AND HER BEST FEMALE FRIEND.  THERE ARE FOUR OR MORE EXTRAS ALSO IN THE COFFEE HOUSE.  (THE OPENING SCENE REQUIRES A MINIMUM OF THESE SIX PEOPLE.  QUANTUM GIRL IS SETTING AT A TABLE WITH HER BEST FRIEND "ASHLEY" AND IS SHOWING HER HOW TO FOLD A TWENTY DOLLAR BILL TO MAKE THE BURNING TWIN TOWERS AND AN AIRPLANE. THERE IS ANOTHER FRIEND (AN EXTRA #1) AT THE TABLE ALSO.

A POET IS READING (USE ONE OF THE EXTRA FOR THIS)

{CLOSE UP SHOT OF QUANTUM GIRL'S HANDS AND TWENTY DOLLAR BILL}

QUANTUM GIRL, "You first fold it in half like this"  Folds horizontal half "Then under and up like this"  Makes diagonal fold on the left side  "Your then make a right diagonal fold just like the one I just made"  Fold the right side "You see the pentagon burning and if you turn it over you will see the twin towers burning"  QUANTUM GIRL PAUSES THREE SECONDS and continues, "Coincidence? Need I remind you that 9 and 11 make 20?"

{CUT TO EXTRA - MEDIUM SHOT}

THE EXTRA FINISHES HER POEM AND SAYS, "Ashley?"

{MEDIUM SHOT ON ASHLEY}

ASHLEY PUSHES HER CHAIR BACK AND SAYS, "It is my turn.  I got to go up"  AND CONTINUES TO THE PERFORMANCE AREA.

{CUT TO QUANTUM GIRL}

QUANTUM GIRL,  "OK, I will move closer so I can hear you."  MOVES TO ASHLEY'S EMPTY SEAT

{CLOSE UP SHOT ON QUANTUM GIRL FACE}

QUANTUM GIRL HEARS ASHLEY'S VOICE WHISPERING,  "Does she really think I believe that crap.  It is just a coincidence. If you folded toilet paper enough you could probably find burning twin towers"

QUANTUM GIRL SAYS, "Wow!  I can hear what Ashley was thinking a few seconds ago."

QUANTUM GIRL HAS PUZZLED LOOK ON HER FACE

{CUT TO CLOSE UP OF EXTRA #1}

EXTRA #1 HAS A PUZZLED LOOK ON HIS FACE and says, "What do you mean you can tell what she was thinking a few seconds ago?"

{CUT TO CLOSE UP OF QUANTUM GIRL}

QUANTUM GIRL SAYS, "When I was folding that Usama twenty she was thinking it was a bunch of crap."  QUANTUM GIRL PAUSES A SECOND OR TWO AND CONTINUES, "She said you could fold toilet paper and probably find burning twin towers."

{CUT TO CLOSE UP OF EXTRA #1}

EXTRA #1 SAYS, "I didn't hear her say that.  I didn't hear her say anything except that it was her time to read."

{CUT TO CLOSE UP OF QUANTUM GIRL}

QUANTUM GIRL SAYS, "I know.  I didn't hear her say it either until I moved to her chair after she left.  It was like I could read her short term memory from a place that she once was."

{CUT TO CLOSE UP OF EXTRA #1}

EXTRA #1 SAYS, "Sure" sarcastically

{PAN TO ASHLEY READING HER POETRY} ASHLEY INTRODUCES AND READS ABOUT THIRTY SECONDS OF HER POEM.  GO TO POEM CONTENT

{PAN TO DOOR}

THE MASKED SON OF MAD BLASTER BURST THROUGH THE DOOR .

{MEDIUM SHOT OF SON OF MAD BLASTER} SON OF MAD BLASTER YELLS "I hate poetry" HE PULLS THE PIN ON A GRENADE AND ROLLS IT TO THE MIDDLE OF THE COFFEE HOUSE FLOOR.

{A FEW SECONDS OF CLOSE UP SHOT OF THE GRENADE AS IT ROLLS AND AFTER IT STOPS}

{CUT TO ASHLEY}  ASHLEY QUITS READING BUT JUST STANDS THERE. 

{CUT TO WIDE ANGLE OF EXTRAS} ALL EXTRAS DIVE TO THE FLOOR.

{CUT TO QUANTUM GIRL} QUANTUM GIRL REMAINS IN HER SEAT.

{CUT TO MEDIUM SHOT OF SON OF MAD BLASTER}

SON OF MAD BLASTER CONTINUES TO YELL, "I hate poetry....I hate poetry....and laughs Ha, Ha, Ha, Ha, Ha" AS HE TURNS AND EXITS.

{FADE TO DARK}

SCENE ENDS WITH NARRATOR SAYING  "Tune in next week to see if Quantum Girl and her friends escape the grenade of the poetry hating Son of Mad Blaster"

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